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Kate's avatar

I really like it. It is a very poised work which engages me with its emotional progression from shame and embarrassment to a kind of contained drive to rage. Keep it up.

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Martin Garcia's avatar

Nymph!

"what i had really seen / was the fennel" I liked this line a bunch. Something about being able to see the world for what it is without distraction is a skill. Something I aspire to - 'simple' as it is.

Hope you are doing swell!

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